the seed

this is another poem that i made
and..
i kind of..
not satisfied a little bit
but
never mind
just wrinting in~~


"the pain is mine,
to give and to feel,
the pain i give stupidly in peel,
mesmorize everything,
craving grave for instance,
leaping to be freed,

stupid, fool and many,
cannot be relesed,
for the one that truly,
never unless ease,

in road i feel,
hoping for somebody,
quickly it wilt,
for never i will,
as pain grew i grew,
changes everything,
shaking in within.."



this poem was
originally inside my diary
i'm not used to write any poem
inside my diary
so i rewrite it and
put it here!!
hope you like it..

NO MORE

i was kinda
puttin' myself in hiatus mode
for a while...
since my school been closed
for a week..
of course..
H1N1
but i manage to do some
other creative stuffs
like my drawings are getting better
each time..
and that was a total releif..

and..
this is my new hand-made poem
please enjoy it deeply
^^

sailing on the abandoned ship
skeletons all around
no more pain in the ass to scold
only skirls as a hold
and i slowly became
what is around
cursed by the look
mastered by the fruit

the tawny ship slowly putrescent
wearing taupe sleeve
plastered with faulty weeds
no concoct as a guide
only conciseness without concinnity
the dark veil became the cover
never to show what's beyond

the day was covered by smog
the night was wearing evil coat
along the path shall it move
carrying liquor and gold
but wahat will the body use to hold
adding the pain without the gain


this poem was made when i am
immersed in emotional
remembering the character "jack"
in One Piece..
he's a skeleton..
a MOVING, once DEAD..
but still alive
coz he ate the devil fruit
that gave him another life

it's intresting
the story..
it's intresting
you know..
in other stories..
the bad guys always search for the
so called power that enables them
to live a longer life or another life
and when they do get it
their looks doesnt change
but in One Piece
it's not the bad guys who got the power
but the good guy gets to eat it
accidently
but, his looks change
aven though he had another life
he became a skeleton
coz he once dead..
haha~ ^^